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| I wish i could fly 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseum, wow...that's it, there's really nothing else to say |
| Chandra-Moon 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWow this is magnificent! Everything about it...the story is beautiful, and so is the writing, especially the way you incorporated the science into it. One of my all time favorite poems ever. And only 2 reviews? Fictionpress people have no taste. |
| Lines To Time 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, the envy, it kills me so dead. :( There was one part I noticed that seemed a bit choppy (the "before I shrunk to smaller than an atom" part, and it's "shrank," silly :-P), but that is my ONLY criticism and really, that's unfair, I hate you. Particularly love the second stanza, because it's beautiful, but also it says something and it's right. Keep it up, Miss Sophie :-P. |
| Nothing is Trivial 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abusePossibly one of the greatest poems i have seen or will ever see on fiction press. well done, this is beatiful. |