 Ashly 2005-12-09 . chapter 1 Makes me wanna enlist... oh wait... already have. Nice and very thought provoking. Keep it up |
 Marjorie Swann 2005-10-19 . chapter 1I don't think suicide bombers are insane or evil--they have certain beliefs and they see the world differently because of those beliefs. Given, their actions are terrible and brutal and wrong, but that isn't the way /they/ see it. I'm enjoying your poems. Keep it up. |
 Michael McCarthy 2005-09-12 . chapter 1This is a great poem. I like it a lot. It tells exactly how ignorant terrorists act, and that they don't care about anyone's lives, including their own. Anyway, great poem. Keep up the good work. |
 Robert West 2005-09-12 . chapter 1Jeremy this was a really good poem I liked it, it has alot to do with the terrorist attacks that are happening today in the world's society. |
 His Mercy's Waiting 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Wow, you really captured the picture of terroists in the poem. I like how you only write rhyming poems, 'cuz I do the same! It makes it so much easier, huh?
~happy writing~ |