Reviews for The All American Family life

Link-Atrix 2006-01-28 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is a beautiful poem! You have used wonderful words and you have a nice pace. Nice job :)
Exiled-Knight 2005-10-21 ch 1,	abuseInteresting idea, nicely written.
youzi 2005-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI think the style of this piece is really interesting, engaging and yet with a chilly aloofness of tone. I like how you exploited the perspective of the young boy in portraying the unpleasantness...and also the question abt the heretics. do keep writing =D
Midnight Lynx 2005-09-01 ch 1,	abuseThere is alot of emotion in this poem,It sounds like a kid dealing with devoirce,I'm really empressed by the way you captured the characters emotion.This was very well thought and sounds like you felt for this or you could relate to it.I could be wrong but it just seems that way.Great work Shakespeare! ~Priscilla~
Lakoria 2005-08-21 ch 1,	abuseLife; bits doesn't it? Somehow it keeps going though. Good job. I liked your discriptions. Excelent subject. Good use of volcabulary... I think that's about it. I enjoyed it and keep it up. God bless, Lakoria