 Auster2 2006-01-29 . chapter 1short, simple, beautiful. |
 Michael l'oeil fol 2005-10-31 . chapter 1a beautifully realistic and sardonic image of a first kiss i love it |
 Moonjava 2005-08-21 . chapter 1Very sweet.I like it. |
 misery re 2005-08-18 . chapter 1NICE!
I have a poem called "First Kiss" or something like that. I can't remember.
I love the last line of this poem by the way. |
 Blazer456 2005-08-18 . chapter 1 Wow! That was really good! |