I like it. It's unique, and it's got... spunk almost. It's definitely got a personality of it's own, and the whole things flows beautifully. :)

wow...all of these were really good and really deep...u my friend are a really good poet

I wish I could say I agree, of course your opinion is your own, but I can't agree on love. I truly don't believe in it (despite it being my little nickname for everyone). Your opinion was wonderful, I enjoyed it, but being I don't believe in love...this all seems a bit weird. -^^- Wonderful work.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Hm...this made me think of yaoi... XD But I can't believe it! You made the sequel to LYHM and I haven't even read it! Gyah! I'm so sorry! But I liked this and I'll be sure to read it soon (sorry, leaving class). Great work!

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Mm...kitty... XD Okay, just playin' with ya! But wow, I loved your story "Love Me, Hate You" (well, it shows under my Morbid Maxwell account) but I never knew you were a poet! ...wow, this was great. -^^- I'm gonna read the rest now...oh, and thanks for the support (much lovin' from Morbid Maxwell...ain't that special?)!

Harlequin~Please fix me...

It's very beautiful! Does it come from you're heart Kchan?

*clap clap clap claps* Spoken like a true poet! It has a secret meaning I supose that I am yet to figue out! Go Kchan!

Miss-nina

o.o sounds to mature for me! >__< Blood... icky. Whenever I watch those freaky surgery shows and I see the blood, my feet start twitching! 11 year old me... but soon I'll be twelve so I'll actually be like... close to 13 so I can actually say "I'm 12 so I can read 13+ stories!

And it's a great poem. I love how you descibe what the scene is like. This story of Tobira sounds good. She must be a good friend for you to write a song for her story.MN

K-CHAN! *glomps* I'm so sorry for not reviewing/updating in so goddamn long. I've been so busy with school, but now that I don't have tests coming up, I'm busy typing up everything that I wrote out of sheer boredom in school.

As usual, your writing is beyond perfect and I'm honored to have the two songs you have written in the Nobody Tuesday. *grins* You're the best K-chan! I'll talk to you later!

I like the image that this conveys.. the binding and the pain. I really like that about it and the fact that it's done so well.

This is beautiful and powerful in my opinion. (What else can I really write about, eh?) Anyways, the repetition of the first two lines was good, and it really made the last two stanzas more powerful.. provoked a response easily. It flowed easily as well, and yeah.. I love it actually

Yay, rhyme! Heh.. again it's inspiring because it reminds how wondrous a thing creativity actually is. Without it life would be bland, boring.. there wouldn't be an escape or anything, and that can be important in life

This is beautiful and well put.. I think that it sums up what love is for a lot of people (of course it's inevitably different from person to person) Actually this is quite inspiring and if I wasn't too busy trying to catch up on everything I might feel like writing (which would be a truly wondrous thing, heh).

I like the imagery of this, I can imagine the person (in my mind a woman) clad in just the sheets which is where the protective-ness of the sheets come in. See, it's good because I can easily get an image that works for me..

I like the middle section of this best but maybe that's because of my obsession with rhyme.. heh.

0_0 Wow. The into scared me off, but I read it anyway. Tear! Darn you Kchan, you depress the innocence off 11 years old! Sniffle. How you dare I do not know! Filled with sarcasm. I should have taken the warning 13+!

Other wise... well this poem was really sad. You completely drained the happiness of me from the 4th poem.

Mn