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| Eresse 2005-12-10 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. It's unique, and it's got... spunk almost. It's definitely got a personality of it's own, and the whole things flows beautifully. :) |
| hoshi-chan590 2005-12-02 ch 7, | abusewow...all of these were really good and really deep...u my friend are a really good poet |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseI wish I could say I agree, of course your opinion is your own, but I can't agree on love. I truly don't believe in it (despite it being my little nickname for everyone). Your opinion was wonderful, I enjoyed it, but being I don't believe in love...this all seems a bit weird. -^^- Wonderful work. Harlequin~Please fix me... |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-22 ch 2, | abuseHm...this made me think of yaoi... XD But I can't believe it! You made the sequel to LYHM and I haven't even read it! Gyah! I'm so sorry! But I liked this and I'll be sure to read it soon (sorry, leaving class). Great work! Harlequin~Please fix me... |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseMm...kitty... XD Okay, just playin' with ya! But wow, I loved your story "Love Me, Hate You" (well, it shows under my Morbid Maxwell account) but I never knew you were a poet! ...wow, this was great. -^^- I'm gonna read the rest now...oh, and thanks for the support (much lovin' from Morbid Maxwell...ain't that special?)! Harlequin~Please fix me... |
| Nai-chan 2005-10-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseIt's very beautiful! Does it come from you're heart Kchan? *clap clap clap claps* Spoken like a true poet! It has a secret meaning I supose that I am yet to figue out! Go Kchan! Miss-nina |
| Nai-chan 2005-10-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseo.o sounds to mature for me! >__< Blood... icky. Whenever I watch those freaky surgery shows and I see the blood, my feet start twitching! 11 year old me... but soon I'll be twelve so I'll actually be like... close to 13 so I can actually say "I'm 12 so I can read 13+ stories! And it's a great poem. I love how you descibe what the scene is like. This story of Tobira sounds good. She must be a good friend for you to write a song for her story.MN |
| kakera 2005-09-26 ch 7, | abuseK-CHAN! *glomps* I'm so sorry for not reviewing/updating in so goddamn long. I've been so busy with school, but now that I don't have tests coming up, I'm busy typing up everything that I wrote out of sheer boredom in school. As usual, your writing is beyond perfect and I'm honored to have the two songs you have written in the Nobody Tuesday. *grins* You're the best K-chan! I'll talk to you later! |
| rainbowskye 2005-09-03 ch 6, | abuseI like the image that this conveys.. the binding and the pain. I really like that about it and the fact that it's done so well. |
| rainbowskye 2005-08-26 ch 5, | abuseThis is beautiful and powerful in my opinion. (What else can I really write about, eh?) Anyways, the repetition of the first two lines was good, and it really made the last two stanzas more powerful.. provoked a response easily. It flowed easily as well, and yeah.. I love it actually |
| rainbowskye 2005-08-26 ch 4, | abuseYay, rhyme! Heh.. again it's inspiring because it reminds how wondrous a thing creativity actually is. Without it life would be bland, boring.. there wouldn't be an escape or anything, and that can be important in life |
| rainbowskye 2005-08-26 ch 3, | abuseThis is beautiful and well put.. I think that it sums up what love is for a lot of people (of course it's inevitably different from person to person) Actually this is quite inspiring and if I wasn't too busy trying to catch up on everything I might feel like writing (which would be a truly wondrous thing, heh). |
| rainbowskye 2005-08-26 ch 2, | abuseI like the imagery of this, I can imagine the person (in my mind a woman) clad in just the sheets which is where the protective-ness of the sheets come in. See, it's good because I can easily get an image that works for me.. |
| rainbowskye 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the middle section of this best but maybe that's because of my obsession with rhyme.. heh. |
| Miss-Nina 2005-08-24 ch 5, | abuse0_0 Wow. The into scared me off, but I read it anyway. Tear! Darn you Kchan, you depress the innocence off 11 years old! Sniffle. How you dare I do not know! Filled with sarcasm. I should have taken the warning 13+! Other wise... well this poem was really sad. You completely drained the happiness of me from the 4th poem. Mn |