I really like this poem! It is very true to life and the subject is creative. Good work! :)

I really like this! It illustrates the frustration of a teenager so well! I epsecially like the reoccurring line "against all odds." Yes, indeed I survived high school against all odds. Very inspiring...angsty...awesome stuff! Keep up the good work! And thank you for all of your reviews! Sorry that I just got around to mine. *hides in corner* lol

WOW! Hello- GREAT poem! So true to - great ending...no the whole thing was great. You couldn't have made it any better.

amazing! your poem is so... true! i loved it!i thought as soon as i read your first line.. woah this is soo realistic but at the same time so dramatic and out of reach to what is reality.i like this poem a lot as u can tell, keep it up! well done ;)mia x

you prove a very good point...sometimes grown-ups need to know when to back off and leave us alone. great work!

Sorrow

O.O Adored the last line!

It's so true. _ More realistic-ness, you wrote this well.

o. i like this. especially the last bit 'Purposely inhabiting inhibition (RELIGIONS) Against the adults who think they are our G.O.D'. Pure brilliance.

A very powerful piece. I like it! Rock on! Thanks for reviewing! QueenVixta

good work, rock on! .

-Amaya and Tracy (please review back)