Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Eagles' Wings
sleepiness 2006-06-03 . chapter 1
Gives a great feeling of hope.It's uplifting.^_^
SliversofSilverPain 2005-09-11 . chapter 1
I love it! I need to add this one to my favourites well! sweet! It's beautiful.The rhyming works really well, but each could probably be longer, because they're so good.
Unready 2005-08-27 . chapter 1
thoroughly enjoyed. keep it up!
Lady Glass 2005-08-23 . chapter 1
This is nice, it's not so hopeless as the others, this one has that nice hopeful feeling...it's nice.

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu
Ebony Stars 2005-08-22 . chapter 1
it's calming, very well written and just brilliantly hopeful.

p.s ~ just so you know (i can see you are new) to get rid of those massive spaces in between sentences, you press shift as well as return before starting a new line - i just think it makes it look better.
Evelyn Tan 2005-08-22 . chapter 1
I love the way this rhymes! =) Very soothing and melodious in a way. I like it. =)

And thanks for the review! =D The water in "Drip Drip" kind of symbolises life. =) So yea... =) I'm glad you like it.
Moonjava 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
Really nice. It flows really well.
Xaquelina 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
I really like all your work, and especially this poem. Keep it up, and thanks for the wonderful compliment.
Needa S 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
Wow...Picture perfect. Excellent job! Keep'em coming. God Bless!

Needa S.
Whisper on the Lips 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Ahh that is soo sweet! ( ; Quite a nice job, really lovely! ( = WRITE ON!!
Chad M-H 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Great stuff! I really like the combonation of love and spirituality (sp?). The last stanza brilliant, I like that sort of repetition.
Raven-ember 2005-08-19 . chapter 1
very lovely, i enjoyed your poems very much!! all were very good!!
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-08-19 . chapter 1
Wonderful and heartfely...congrgats, well done. R&r means Read and review...so yer, wen u get time r&r my stuff, thanks^_^
modern-juliet 2005-08-19 . chapter 1
that was incredible. i can tell you're hopeful that this will work outi was wiping tears from my eyes

- kristina
maxnotevoltage 2005-08-19 . chapter 1
Very hopeful and inspiring! You worded this perfectly. -- J.max
Return to Top