 sleepiness 2006-06-03 . chapter 1Gives a great feeling of hope.It's uplifting.^_^ |
 SliversofSilverPain 2005-09-11 . chapter 1I love it! I need to add this one to my favourites well! sweet! It's beautiful.The rhyming works really well, but each could probably be longer, because they're so good. |
 Unready 2005-08-27 . chapter 1thoroughly enjoyed. keep it up! |
 Lady Glass 2005-08-23 . chapter 1This is nice, it's not so hopeless as the others, this one has that nice hopeful feeling...it's nice.
Luv, Anne Hereatta
True Child of the Xenu |
 Ebony Stars 2005-08-22 . chapter 1it's calming, very well written and just brilliantly hopeful.
p.s ~ just so you know (i can see you are new) to get rid of those massive spaces in between sentences, you press shift as well as return before starting a new line - i just think it makes it look better. |
 Evelyn Tan 2005-08-22 . chapter 1I love the way this rhymes! =) Very soothing and melodious in a way. I like it. =)
And thanks for the review! =D The water in "Drip Drip" kind of symbolises life. =) So yea... =) I'm glad you like it. |
 Moonjava 2005-08-21 . chapter 1Really nice. It flows really well. |
 Xaquelina 2005-08-21 . chapter 1I really like all your work, and especially this poem. Keep it up, and thanks for the wonderful compliment. |
 Needa S 2005-08-21 . chapter 1Wow...Picture perfect. Excellent job! Keep'em coming. God Bless!
Needa S. |
 Whisper on the Lips 2005-08-20 . chapter 1Ahh that is soo sweet! ( ; Quite a nice job, really lovely! ( = WRITE ON!! |
 Chad M-H 2005-08-20 . chapter 1Great stuff! I really like the combonation of love and spirituality (sp?). The last stanza brilliant, I like that sort of repetition. |
 Raven-ember 2005-08-19 . chapter 1very lovely, i enjoyed your poems very much!! all were very good!! |
 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Wonderful and heartfely...congrgats, well done. R&r means Read and review...so yer, wen u get time r&r my stuff, thanks^_^ |
 modern-juliet 2005-08-19 . chapter 1that was incredible. i can tell you're hopeful that this will work outi was wiping tears from my eyes
- kristina |
 maxnotevoltage 2005-08-19 . chapter 1Very hopeful and inspiring! You worded this perfectly. -- J.max |