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| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-11-03 ch 1,  | abusewow, this is really awesome. clever rhyming. i love the feeling. so angst, so angry, i like it. i love the lines "i didn't write the play/ but i'm in the cast" they are so perfect in every way for life itself. those were clever lines. and, i also liked the last four lines. thought they portrayed alot. great job and keep writing! ~davida |
| Tears Of The Black Dragones... 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abusethat's cool, i write short stories too. and alot of poetry. i laughed at your review. your funny. WRITE ON!!(= p.s. what does your name mean? |
| Megg D 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAwsome, awsome.--Meg |
| Isis ShadowWolf 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThats the reason that I write!! I love looking through old notebooks and seeing all the things that I felt. It's like having a journal of emotion... I like this poem. Good job. |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHmm... It's a lot easier to write for ourselves, because we know exactly what we mean. People often look too deeply into poetry and come up with meanings that aren't there. But we know. Amazing poetry.. -- J-max |