just wanted to allow you a peek inside my head.

i think that the line after "look within and not without", would sound better as "learn from every tear and doubt". i dunno... i just thought it would sound better...

oh sounds like there was an issue you had problems dealing with...

intresting ryhme scheme...

hm. crying rain? cool.

ooh angsty.

That was absoutely perfect. I'm on the brink of tears. You are TRULY talented.

Was this supposed to make me cry, because it is. Out of all the poems of yours I've read so far, this certainly is the most beautiful, so meaningful and so PERFECT. The words just flow; it's absolutely amazing the way you put this. LOVELY.

Pretty... o.o

and sad.

I love the imagery. It's sad, too, which really gives it a lot of depth.

I definitely would love to see more. Keep writing!