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| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 ch 5,  | abusejust wanted to allow you a peek inside my head. i think that the line after "look within and not without", would sound better as "learn from every tear and doubt". i dunno... i just thought it would sound better... |
| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 ch 4, | abuseoh sounds like there was an issue you had problems dealing with... |
| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 ch 3, | abuseintresting ryhme scheme... |
| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 ch 2, | abusehm. crying rain? cool. |
| I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseooh angsty. |
| FirePrincess-007 2006-03-08 ch 6, | abuseThat was absoutely perfect. I'm on the brink of tears. You are TRULY talented. |
| Peter Pan Died 2005-10-01 ch 6, | abuseWas this supposed to make me cry, because it is. Out of all the poems of yours I've read so far, this certainly is the most beautiful, so meaningful and so PERFECT. The words just flow; it's absolutely amazing the way you put this. LOVELY. |
| BranMuffinMan 2005-09-16 ch 5, | abusePretty... o.o and sad. |
| subtle.assasination 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery. It's sad, too, which really gives it a lot of depth. I definitely would love to see more. Keep writing! |