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I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 . chapter 5
just wanted to allow you a peek inside my head.

i think that the line after "look within and not without", would sound better as "learn from every tear and doubt". i dunno... i just thought it would sound better...
I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 . chapter 4
oh sounds like there was an issue you had problems dealing with...
I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 . chapter 3
intresting ryhme scheme...
I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 . chapter 2
hm. crying rain? cool.
I Enjoy Cotton Socks 2007-07-03 . chapter 1
ooh angsty.
FirePrincess-007 2006-03-08 . chapter 6
That was absoutely perfect. I'm on the brink of tears. You are TRULY talented.
Phasmophile 2005-10-01 . chapter 6
Was this supposed to make me cry, because it is. Out of all the poems of yours I've read so far, this certainly is the most beautiful, so meaningful and so PERFECT. The words just flow; it's absolutely amazing the way you put this. LOVELY.
BranMuffinMan 2005-09-16 . chapter 5
Pretty... o.o

and sad.
subtle.assasination 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
I love the imagery. It's sad, too, which really gives it a lot of depth.

I definitely would love to see more. Keep writing!
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