Beautiful, I esp. enjoyed the informational bit in the introduction. Your words were haunting, although the rhythm was off a bit,that is of little importance when considering the content - high quality and entrancing.

Wow this is really awesome!!

Beautifully written, so compelling with a tad bit of eerie flavor in the backround. Keep up the excellent writings!

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.