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| Islandbreeze 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseShort but intriguing...I love vampire stories so this obviously interested me. Pretty good descriptions, and Luna was an interesting choice of name for a 'servant' of a vampire. Hope you update soon! |
| Ewen Lythrum 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseholy crap! your story gave me deja vuu *eyes author nervously* that settles it! this hasta be a good story then! i love the whole troy tie-in. my only problem with it is that Luna seemed a bit too... quickly submissive. but hey, that might be what ur going for... anyway, good good! please write more! ~curlish |