This was a very strange and unique story...though definately a new taste for me. ^_^ Your style is gripping and very good. It kept me reading. And your characterizations are excellent as well. As you said, I'm not about to debate the theology of it; fiction allows freedom of that sort. So good job - an enjoyable read.

Wow...that was really good. I have to say, I went into this half-expecting some lame un-inventive thing that I'd wish I hadn't started reading. But that's not what you gave me. Nope. This was great, probably the best thing I've found on fanfiction/fictionpress in a while (though I've been ignoring lately, anyway). I can't wait to see what you do with this.

Quinny-poo! You're so cute. HA. i know what her name is! Wait, yes. Yes i do. ho ho.

I hope i get to read the second chapter soon, Jojo. T_T;