Very beautiful, you have such a way with poetry.

I love the color scheme you use in your words... Very beautiful.

Have I said how much I love this one? Well, even in case I didn't, I do. Keep it up, you obviously have a lot of talent with words.

Funkadelic-lol ^-^ I like it

haha I love it ^_^ so innocent, mysterious and fun. Rock on.

love it as per usual, i never know what to say, but i love it thanks for the reviews

seriously digging your hiaku you totally have a gift for it cause i always like what you write and it always makes think hm... why do i hate haiku so much?

this is utterly beautiful.

write on,-Em

Aquafied is a good friend of mine (outside of FictionPress; we're former classmates) and this sums her up so very aptly. All her interpretations and tiny little references tucked safely within her poetry, as numerous as buds and as pure as white. This is so skillful a haiku once the meaning is unraveled.

marie

this is really good. very descriptive with little words to use.

~Sorrow~

a very great piece. I love it!

~Sorrow~

This haiku is definitely my favourite of this collection so far. It is simple on the surface, but I adore the word usage and the imagery of realisations drifting in white buds.

Autumn.

What captured my attention first in this dedication towards DragonLance, is that there is only one haiku compared to the others thus which has been a pair of haiku. What captured my attention second is the imagery of mythical creatures, and that one should be more true and eternal than the other. Confusing but intriguing nonetheless.

Autumn.

“That birds cease flight when skies grow gray-frost.” - strikingly vivid! Nice contrasting of a warm liquid colour in the first haiku and a cold hard colour in the second.

Autumn.

I like how you have captured the human mannerism in the first of the two haiku in this set. The allusions between battle and chess, the two closely related in some philosophical thoughts, is beautifully paired.

Autumn.