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| girl-23 2007-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery beautiful, you have such a way with poetry. |
| Blk Sapphire 2007-04-27 ch 4, | abuseI love the color scheme you use in your words... Very beautiful. |
| Dark-Night-Tigress 2006-09-19 ch 4, | abuseHave I said how much I love this one? Well, even in case I didn't, I do. Keep it up, you obviously have a lot of talent with words. |
| Dark-Night-Tigress 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseFunkadelic-lol ^-^ I like it |
| Felicia Danielle 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abusehaha I love it ^_^ so innocent, mysterious and fun. Rock on. |
| dustytiger 2006-08-18 ch 6, | abuselove it as per usual, i never know what to say, but i love it thanks for the reviews |
| dustytiger 2006-08-18 ch 5, | abuseseriously digging your hiaku you totally have a gift for it cause i always like what you write and it always makes think hm... why do i hate haiku so much? |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-08-14 ch 6, | abusethis is utterly beautiful. write on,-Em |
| diffident 2006-08-13 ch 6, | abuseAquafied is a good friend of mine (outside of FictionPress; we're former classmates) and this sums her up so very aptly. All her interpretations and tiny little references tucked safely within her poetry, as numerous as buds and as pure as white. This is so skillful a haiku once the meaning is unraveled. marie |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2006-08-12 ch 6, | abusethis is really good. very descriptive with little words to use. ~Sorrow~ |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2006-08-12 ch 5, | abusea very great piece. I love it! ~Sorrow~ |
| Safira 2006-08-11 ch 6, | abuseThis haiku is definitely my favourite of this collection so far. It is simple on the surface, but I adore the word usage and the imagery of realisations drifting in white buds. Autumn. |
| Safira 2006-08-11 ch 5, | abuseWhat captured my attention first in this dedication towards DragonLance, is that there is only one haiku compared to the others thus which has been a pair of haiku. What captured my attention second is the imagery of mythical creatures, and that one should be more true and eternal than the other. Confusing but intriguing nonetheless. Autumn. |
| Safira 2006-08-11 ch 4, | abuse“That birds cease flight when skies grow gray-frost.” - strikingly vivid! Nice contrasting of a warm liquid colour in the first haiku and a cold hard colour in the second. Autumn. |
| Safira 2006-08-11 ch 3, | abuseI like how you have captured the human mannerism in the first of the two haiku in this set. The allusions between battle and chess, the two closely related in some philosophical thoughts, is beautifully paired. Autumn. |