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| Omok 2008-08-14 ch 21,  | abuseI can't believe...you..ended it...that way...kinda..T-T ITS LIKE A BOOT IN THE HEAD T-T completely unexpected T-T T-T lol well, great story! =D thanks for writing it! xD love to be your 84th reviewer lol XD =D |
| J* 2008-02-09 ch 21, anon. | abuse** YAH LIZ! jez if life were liek that we would not need a mastercard;) haha no but fo real, i like lovelvoelovelovelove this story=D |
| Lizzie's Illusionist 2008-01-07 ch 21, | abuseI love it baby and the ending is awesome. I like how you did it =] congratulations on finishing it ^^ -kisses- I love you sweetie! |
| Islandgyal2004 2007-12-25 ch 21, | abuseCan't wait for the sequel |
| dlaina 2007-12-10 ch 19, | abusedang they have a lot of sex. hmm this dinner should be interesting. |
| Islandgyal2004 2007-12-09 ch 19, | abuseAwesome update |
| briannathewriter 2007-12-09 ch 19, | abuseLMAO, now that's something I can relate to! I dated my principal's niece for the longest time. It was scary to be walking down a hall and seeing him glaring at me all the time... |
| dlaina 2007-12-08 ch 6, | abuseholy crap her brothers violent. i likey the story.cant wait to finish it. |
| empty-spiral 2007-11-18 ch 17, | abuseits kind of stream-of-concious-esque? it kinda reads from a less externalized viewpoint, anyways. unusual, but nice. good job. |
| Nico-artjunkie 2007-09-05 ch 17, | abuseeither Alex has all absence of boobs or felicia thought that Alex had some serious pecks...I LOVE AVATAR omg like one of the best cartoons ever but seriously it's all about Toft she's awesome...anyway now that i'm totally caught up finally and now that i realized i'm an idiot and in one of my reviews of Inseperable i told Jarin that all i had to catch up on was Jarin i must go *Nico* |
| Nico-artjunkie 2007-09-05 ch 16, | abusehey i'm actually legal to read this now YES!! course thats not saying much...anyway yes i'm sure the punishment would have been torturous right well i must continue on now *Nico* |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-07-27 ch 17, | abuselol wow, i like the end that was pretty funny. it was good. |
| Islandgyal2004 2007-07-27 ch 17, | abuseAwesome update, keep it up |
| Lizzie's Illusionist 2007-07-26 ch 17, | abuseHey baby =D Just wanted to let you know that the chapter was great, as always, and I loved the ending =P |
| Ashley 2007-06-22 ch 16, anon. | abuselizzie.. you are something. it's funny.. because.. none of us are even close to 18.. well except oldy. -cough- jarin -cough- haha. so jarin is your insperstion huh? maybe you should keep that information to yourself.. i don't wanna hear about my twin's sex life, thanks anyways ;) and i'm gonna guess the consequences - YNGA? lmfao. good chapter hun. |