this is really good. I love the way it flows and the ending. it has the reality in it when you say, "earthly things". great work!

~Sorrow~

Full of cynism, almost opposite of blind faith or hope, and ironic in ways.

I love the poem and its meaning, you put it so nicely.

~* noelle

i love the beginning especially. brilliant idea.

"Those lovely, lovely earthly things"

It's like candy. Sugary and oh-so-bad, but to not have it? Travesty.

oh my, i am bursting with things to say about this.

Worry. Until our doomsday party.- i used to use writings with that title, longstory but it made my mind chuckle.

You can only (hope) that your tomorrow is better than your yesterday./Faith. Is something that we need to have./And Hope, is something that we'd like to have.-bloody brilliant, to bad i dont have faith anymore though. hopeless thinker.

As I go to heaven to meet my groom,-that is so deliciously sad, it makes my heart and head swoon, just a delight.

your lines in this, agh, just make me spin.lovely earth things. fly to heaven with paper wings.

oh delightful, mascara closed eyes.