This is really lovely. You capture real human emotions well.

The bottom of this window says that i should give you constructive advice. I don't have any advice but i do have a comment. the line,"for you won't tell me what's wrong." kind-of jarred me because the rest of your poem isn't written in the kind of style that you usually find the word, "for" in. I think that if you take out the word 'for' in that line, it will make what you're trying to say in it more effective.

This isn't a hate comment, i promise it is just friendly.