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blurrylights 2009-03-02 . chapter 1
This was a really cool piece...the way you structured it and the ending really were very creative.
Nia 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
I really like this story. The structure and wording of the story was different, but in a good way! Keep up the good work!
Lysander Finn 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
I have to say, its not what I was expecting. I really like the way you structured the story.

The whole.. structure of a relationship vs. structure of a joke.

Well written. I liked it.
Runic Binary 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
An excellent analogy. All the little details aout the characters and their relationship were very interesting; it made me want to keep reading. I think the conclusion was my favorite part. It is a great punchline.

By the way, thanks for your great review! It was very helpful :D
Firespirit44 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
This piece is wonderful. O.o You have an amazing descriptive ability..heck, I don't even know if that's a correct term, but you know what I mean.

Good job. O.o
crystal teardrop rain 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Wow... That is a truly amazing and detailed piece. You've done an amazing job with this and I am thrilled to be able to say that I have read it. Keep writing because this is an amazing piece!
Lady E 2006-01-03 . chapter 1
Fantastic emotion and imagery and flow! Really, I am captivated. Granted, I must admit I don't understand all of the joke analogy, but it was nonetheless a unique analogy and very well-done. I mean, wow. I loved the italics as his "joke"; I could practically hear them spoken. And the flow was unbelievable. *laughs* I'm barely coherent, I'm so amazed. Too bad my favorites list is full... Very very nice job.
Lonely Forest 2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Wow. really good job. it's very interesting how you use the joke as a sort of analogy for the relationship and betrayl. i love it.

good read.
Jaizar 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
awesome, as usual! u know i adore this one =D wow, i didn't relaize the first tiem that he was cheating..he was cheating, right? so sad. neway, good work!JB
Rebane 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
simply amazing.
account not in use 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Wow. Beautiful writing...and so sad. Wow...Reminds me of my last two relationships...
chuppachupgirl 2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Wow! This is great! I love the way you structured it, and how yoy keep on drawing back to things in the past. Five stars!
Sally-andersonn 2005-08-19 . chapter 1
this is a really cool idea. keep writing. could develope ti a bit more
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