Very nice for a death poem, and i like how you used latin. Anyways i read ur little ramble that was under ur BIO and if you're feeling happy i recommend that you try writing something happy, you never know what you'll come up with.

"Death Also Cries"

Brilliant.

Latin is an efficient way to write a poem. But not only is it efficient, it also creates a mysterious and thoughtful peice. Marvelous work,

-The Depths of Blue

I love the imagery. Really nice.

Great detail and imagry, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

'tis lovely. Latin is a beatiful language, like your poem. i like the emotions behind it.

EB