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Different Definitions Of Storm
2005-08-20 . chapter 1
An interesting concept... A like the part where it goes "Maybe now you'll know / You'll never find another fool / Who'll treat you as I do". It sort of ties the others stanzas together. =) Nicely done.
gremlin-oompaloompa
2005-08-20 . chapter 1
i kind of have the same problem, my one friend was very selfish like that too. this is nicely written, i like it! keep at it! :D
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