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Reviews For: The Fire Inside

Sevidian
2005-08-31
ch 1,
abuseDespite how much you put this story, and even though you wrote it so long ago, I really enjoyed this one. It was short and sweet! I thought it made perfect sense as well.-Sevidian
Sally-andersonn
2005-08-30
ch 1,
abuseSpooky. It was spooky and creeped the hell of of me in the middle. The beginning, not too bad. I don't think that when people sponteaneously combust they leave ashes. I think they leave a fatty substance. They ending wasn't that good. Work on your endings a bit more.A very good story and spooky.
firewitch1soulwriter
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseI'v offically stolen your review virginity! :P Great story, keep writing

-Britt ^^
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