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| Sevidian 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseDespite how much you put this story, and even though you wrote it so long ago, I really enjoyed this one. It was short and sweet! I thought it made perfect sense as well.-Sevidian |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseSpooky. It was spooky and creeped the hell of of me in the middle. The beginning, not too bad. I don't think that when people sponteaneously combust they leave ashes. I think they leave a fatty substance. They ending wasn't that good. Work on your endings a bit more.A very good story and spooky. |
| firewitch1soulwriter 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI'v offically stolen your review virginity! :P Great story, keep writing -Britt ^^ |