your
work
defines
perfection.

utterly perfect.

oh.. wow.you have such a captivating writing style!each of the three parts showing the theme of being trapped adds a nice constant thought. well done!

beautiful, gorgeous, magnificent. i love this piece: it b r e a t h e s.

I very much liked the image of the sky beging impaled on the skyline (fir trees maybe?) I like the raw quality of your writing, you have no need to comfort the reader with pretty or tame imagery when harsh or even disturbing words are required.

I love the last two lines. Interesting repetition of skin sticks in my head through this. It's also so stuffed of images that I loose the track of where it's going.

A heave of insomnia. That's incredible. I love the opening to (ii.) and the ending of (i.).

... Ihavenowords (again). Every line is perfect, but I'll specifically point out the first five lines because well, wow it's ** amazing. I am stunned. Just stunned.

I'm speechless. This is one of the most gorgeousperfectamazing poems that I've ever read. I love everything.

I loved this, its like a painting that I'm being painted in to. You let the reader exist amungst the words.

Juliet.

oh my god, that was gorgeous. the stanza about the walls is so genius and dark and beautiful... i love it. the helix and spine touches are wonderful. the end- the end is just amazing. it fits in a perfect way. i just aboslutely love this. it is a favorite now.

Wow. Very powerful, emotive piece. Amazing imagery, very original; beautiful, moving work.