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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-27 ch 1,  | abuseSo I hope you didn't go out and commit a crime spree (or just one crime) after concocting this violent poem. ;) Joking. Good job. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| katie killjoy 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseNot all goths are cruel and want to kill people...I liked this though. |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abusei adore the first lines.kudos. |
| IceAngel2008 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abusenice poem. i like it alot. |
| Maisha Mafuriko 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseJust when it seems the news reports can not get any worse what with New Orleans in Flood and L.A. Calif. in a power failure, FEMA Director Resigns, Prez Bush needs to get whoever on the Supreme Court...then I go and read this writin' of yours and just about fall on the floor laughing... go figure! Thanks for brightening up my day... Maisha/Connie |
| Chatterpillar 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseok, that was really creepy, but REALLY good. lol. nice |
| All That Is Left Are Memori... 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseYou are crazy, lol. It ain't always a bad thing. Let's do what you said in our poem to both of our roommates. Anyway, good job! |
| Indigo-Andie 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abusei love it...was that written about an ex perhaps LMAO...yeah i don't think i could but damn when i'm **... |
| Shateeria 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOh my God...this is so fire! It's deep and dark and excellent. I especially love the first lines: "No, I don’t indulge in the black makeup and black clothes.I just partake in the black thoughts and black woes." Because those lines are so real cus you don't have to wear dark clothes to be deep and dark or different. You just are. haha. Anyways, peace up. Love,Shay |
| Archipelago 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem. I like the flow of the couplets. Kinda depressing though. Anywho, great job. |
| breezy nostrils 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat is really messed up, but I like the whole crazy aspect of the poem. |
| Chell-o Bodello 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. I'm at a loss for words. That's how awesome this poem is ... I just ... oh, WOW. I know I sound like a total idiot, but this poem is awesome and beautifully written. ~ Lunchi |