Wow...one of my new favorites. I loved the repetition, from the begnning to the end. It really closed and began the poem. A very nice piece, look foward to reading more:)

Damn! That was god. It really made me think. And it definitely put me in the shoes of a homeless person. Deeper than I ever thought I would be. Excellent stuff. PEACE

This is a wonderful poem. Great work. Sry just woke up so this is a bad review. Keep up the good work.

that man is a very special man and the Lord is holding him gently in his arms. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!