I love the message behind all of these different cinareos and the way you write it is so personal i could almost imagine that you have lived out each one. However in places the rhythm is slightly off but it doesn't take away from the depth of the poem. I like it Alex

wow...this was most definielty my afvourite of yours. i loved how you had the two parts and the imagery you created was amazing. i dont know what else i can really say, but...wow.

i havent looked at your stuff recently, but this is well worth the wait. its as fantastic as it is different to ur norm. great!

Han.

wow another one of your best! this is amazing you have the rhyming scheme perfect and the content is just unbelievable! it leaves my mind thinkng what inspired you to write it i just have to know! txt me!

Wow. Such description and the blood throughout the poem. Beautifully done. I love it.

Keep it up.

Lovely poem, thought the first part was definitely better than the second, but both were excellent, really enjoyed it, keep it up

some of the rhyming isn't great, but apart from that, good poem...

wow! intense... extreamly powerful...

Nice, keep writing. -ADD

Wow this is awsome I loved it great job _

wow, it is different from your style, but i like it. it paints such blood-colord pictures to me. amazing.

beautiful, came from your heart-

Terrific. You always deliver your best.

wow, so emotional very well done.

I loved that! It was really deep and written so well.