That is very strong and true. Your writing style is amazing! It's sad that "twelve dollar shoes are our biggest bane," while there are people out there starving. Very moving.

Yes, so very cynical. And funny, although I'm not sure you meant it to be.

//Half ruled by tin Gods, half ruled by the stars.// A very quotable line right there. =)

Extremely cool. So ture and the rhyme is actually not too bad. Except is could be tidy-ed (omg i can't spell tidy-ed(?)) up a little at the line above the last. I like this and love the title lines too.

Very good indeed. Spoilt a little by some of the rhyming: "starvation is fin" and "sharing ain't sane" are awful rhymes. But don't get me wrong, despite that I do genuinly love this poem. OK saying it, of course, but who's going to put it into practice...?

Matt