Reviews for Slice of Life - FictionPress.com

Cheeseraptor5 2006-01-07 ch 1,	abuseWow. One of my favorite styles of writing is using pages and pages of non-wasted words to describe something simple - in this case eating pie. And you pulled it off well.
Galleena 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseOkay, At first I thought 'wow randomness' and 'what happened to the end of that sentence' and 'm.. pie' and it becomes her wrist. Wow! I don't see that one coming. I've read one of the poems on your look-up. The one about the cold plums. Actually we studied it for Junior Cert but it's an odd poem. All the others we read where about dandelions representing invading forces and the like. But not that one. Just thought I'd share that with you! Stick with it, Galleena
spicketstill 2005-09-11 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh. That was amazing. It's so poetic, and darkly funny - and the last paragraph, my gosh! You totally got me. It was a really striking piece.
meitnerium 2005-08-28 ch 1,	abuseoh my lord! what an ending! so amazing! i love it! creepy no? but really, i love it! love it love it love it!...yay!
Renzie 2005-08-21 ch 1,	abuselmao. What?! XD I understood this, and at the same time I didn't. It was entertaining though. Funny. Great job :) I hope to read more of your works.