  L'Arcange 2006-11-01 . chapter 1 Okay, so you've promised to update and you haven't!!
There's too little of this to read! The reason I'm complaining is because it is so good!! I love the idea - very clever and interesting. If this were the synopsis for a novel I would read it no question!
Please update son! The suspense is ...killing... me.
I love your writing style - the use of humour and the nonchalant way in which the horoine tells the story makes it believable! I would absolutely keep reading this if it were updated *hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
Say, if you have all the chappies planned, WHERE ARE THEY? *clears throat, becoming ladylike again* Please update soon, dear.
G. |
  Baby Milo 2006-01-19 . chapter 1Aw, this is so cute so far! Roman is awesome! I love him alrady! Athena seems funny, I like her, too! Update soon! |
 springish 2006-01-03 . chapter 1Aha! Quite a clever story. Different. Interesting. And of course there'll be some Roman/Athena smooching later on? I love bad boys. Athena narrates the story well, using a nice combination of wit and...hmm...ho-hum-nes? Eh -_-. Teehee, this made me giggle: He sympathizes with our loss? He was the one who took him!
You've got humour in the right places and a nice use of detail. Be nice and update soon. :D |
 Look at Her 2005-12-20 . chapter 1oh! good story! update soon! |
| froglover 2005-12-06 . chapter 1 i really like this story and hav ebeen waiting a long time for you to update, i know people get busy but please up date soon, i cant wait! |
| i love frogs 2005-11-24 . chapter 1 i really like this story its really intersting! please please up date soon! |
 punkispurple 2005-08-28 . chapter 1O! So good! and the idea sounds so cool and funny to, Athena rocks... so does Roman! I can't wait to read more!! |
 Tenshistar 2005-08-21 . chapter 1I like it. She has spunk and you don't always see the girl falling in love with the bad guy. I can't wait for you to update. |
 Acquiescent Vanity 2005-08-21 . chapter 1It's good. Keep going with it. |
| Koreangirlme 2005-08-21 . chapter 1 Wow. The first chapter is great! I want to read more... Please update soon! This story'll turn out fantastic! |
 queen-lala 2005-08-21 . chapter 1wow i love this story!! i like how you began telling the story! keep up the good work and update soon^_^ |
 Karuli 2005-08-20 . chapter 1wow, interesting start of a story. can't wait to read the next chappie. clear plastic slippers?!?!?! lmao. anyways, hope you udpate soon. |
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