 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-26 . chapter 1Very cute, and whimsical. As always, this is a dear. |
 Hopeful Light 2005-08-21 . chapter 1This is great and very descriptive. |
 Archipelago 2005-08-21 . chapter 1Oh, very elegant rhyming. It flows perfectly and sounds so beautiful. Great job. |
 Nala Sydreile 2005-08-20 . chapter 1 How divinely adorable! I love it; it sounds like true childhood. Brava!
-Nala |
 Catticus 2005-08-20 . chapter 1aww that was cute! i'm glad you found it! |