whee! this is getting all the more interesting! keep up the updates, please!

Great to see and update after so long. I didn't pick up on any grammar or spelling errors, so that's good.

The chatspeak bit made me laugh =D

I love how Spookah called them Punks. Few Villans have both a cididel of doom and use of slang

Nice to see you updating again - and this chapter was a lot better with regards tenses and grammar - give yourself a pat on the back.

However, I did still pick up on some things:

“Unable to see anything, Slimella got frustrated, as the bucked attached to her head and she was unable to get it off. Nor could she hear anything.” - I think that should be "bucket", and the sentence at the end sounds really choppy and rough. Maybe you could have combined them?

“He with-drew his sword.” - "withdrew" is one word

“she came back 100.” - I think you mean 100 percent?

“Slimella split herself into multiple parts and spread herself thru multiple computers in the city.” - This sounds kind of awkward because you've used the word "mutltiple" twice in one sentence, but you've also used "thru" instead of "through" throughout this whole chapter, and that's just plain old bad english, so if you change anything please make it that, because "thru" isn't a word.

You also seem to switch between calling the badguy "Spookuh" and "Spooker", so it would be good if you decided which one it was.

Overall, though, your writing has really improved, so don't get disheartened by the things I've picked out, because you've really done well. Excellent work. =D

Evil lair, new villan, Trash Nazis, All rockin'! I sense you got a new DVD, eh?

I would watch the same things I said in my other review - tenses.

For instance, in this chapter you start with:

"Jimmy has been able to use his powers in the human world for about a week now, and he is having a hard time controlling them. Even worse, he has a hard time hiding it from the world. Luckily, his best friends are always there to help him, even if they can’t use their cyber-warrior powers in the real world."

That's in the present tense, when it should be in the past tense.

You've also used "your" instead of "you're" a lot. If it's an abbreviation of "You are" it should be "You're" (eg. "You're okay."). If it's something that belongs to you it "your" (eg. "What is your name?").

You also used "their" instead of "there".

("Denny was their, mad about what had happened yesterday.")

"There" is referring to a place (eg. "over there"). "Their" is reffering to a possession of a group of people (eg. "Their room"), and "They're" is an abbreviation of "They are" (eg. "They're all excited about having kick-butt super powers.")

I also noticed a lot more spelling mistakes in this than in the original, (For example, you said "of" instead of "off"), so I would advise doing a little more spell checking before you post.

Good to see you're continuing the tale, the anti-virus police dude is a cool bad guy.

I hope you found this review helpful =D

Ah, the promise of a new villian, fun time happness!

Nice. Definently Power Chapter.I've acualy got an Idea that could help you get more publicity, just give me few days to get every thing ready.

Poor kid, every time he beats up one guy, another one comes back bigger and badder than ever.

So, now that jason got Cyberman into the real world can he get the others out there, er, here? I guess reality means more wonton destruction, that's always fun!

ah-ha the clifhanger, gotta admit, this is one nasty mess you've got Cyberman into.

Captured in the first chapter, that's how you know the rest'll be good.