 Bob 2005-10-10 . chapter 1 Do I detect Adam sticking people in the story? Cause Isaiah reminds me oddly of...um...Adam! And Chocky...
good start though, I like it. |
 Bowling Beaver 2005-10-05 . chapter 1funny. I like it. |
 Violet 2005-09-22 . chapter 1 Hey, it's me from Aspenda! This is really good. it's teh funny, too, and I hope you keep writing it! The school sounds like henrico -.-
I like the title, too; ish tre funny. |
 Moon Unit Omega 2005-08-24 . chapter 1 I'm impressed. Really, I am. This is great so far, and the personalities are great. HA! Pandora ish Kellie, correct? And I assume you are Isaiah. So, read my stuff (Moon Unit Omega is my username) and please review! Thanks...
-Sal (aka M.U.O.) |
 Throggeh, who is too lazy to log in 2005-08-24 . chapter 1 XD I love it! You rawk, man... this is awesome. ^^ |
 InSilverShadows 2005-08-21 . chapter 1Isaiah actually sounds a bit like Chocky. Haha. This is like our street in writing, dude...
I'm so proud of you! *glomps* It's great so far, a bit casual, but that's okay. I luff it so far! Keep up the great work Adam... you're doing so great with the spelling thing! I feel like a second grade teacher saying that, but you really are... i can't wait until we mee dimitrius... |
 Bookworm12-8-90 2005-08-21 . chapter 1XD XD XD omg, this is hilarious! write more! |
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