some how I can really relate. I love the emotion running through this. A wonderful master piece.

~Sorrow~

I love it. The last line especially. My only critique is that you might want to change the emphasis from yet to another. It seems like it would flow better that way.

Good job!

Hey tiana, it's amie...very, very nice...I love the way you use parentheses. love yaamie

Dude, Tia, you so rock at poems ._.!

But, yes... I liked this one X). Especially the part about the 'Sweet, sweet ignorant bliss.'.

But, yes, I'll stop... being an idiot and say your a better poet then I am XP!

-Liar-kun

honest and rough, yet sweet and filled with lies. it seems sincery is overrated lol. i liked it. maybe adding a bit of nuances to the structure though. overall good job ^_^

Incredible...I love it.

"I'll give you yet another chance to linger"

Beautiful.

a beautiful and deep poem of yours, so lovely.

~* noelle

This poem is so full of beautiful hopelessness.

My favorite line would have to be this:

No more suicides and broken lies.

Good job... so pretty!

I really like this... the parenthesis are awesome and the second line is amazing

somehow, the bolded 'yet' didn't seem quite right- that last line left me wanting the emphasis to be on 'another' and then it was on 'yet.' Perhaps this was on purpose, as i've done similar things before. But, anyway, the first half of this is spectacular and the second half nearly as good.

very deep. It's so true how we tend to let them linger, but I think with time it gets better.

This is incredible. Very sad but true in life. Deep meaning and almost anyone can relate. :teardrop: splendid job!

Thanks for sharing! I hope u review me sometime. Thankies :bows:-SagaciousPnay-

I really liked that. It was really good! You write about interesting topics and you have a good writing style. Keep up the good work :)

CK

very pretty and rather sad in its own way...