Is this based off of the Loki from the Avengers? :D lol i like it tho

Loki? You're in to mythology. I find mythology fascinating. I like how you incorporate it in your writing, it definately makes it different.

It's okay to laugh at the last line. The idea is the irony of being destroyed, and when the person finally notices they just kind of think "stop being such a mess."

I know there's that whole "don't reply to reviews with reviews thing...but oh well."

Nice work.

Hey, great poem It does remind me of Loki a bit. Keep up the awesome work

That is kinda Loki-ish. Hail Loki!