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Luzifiel 2005-09-27 ch 1,	abuseThanx for the info but i did my research. i saw there were other fanfics on this page. and i alread y have an acc on ff where i first posted this story. but thnx fur the help nywayz.
Sambev 2005-09-07 ch 1,	abuseI really like Erin. Great story, I like the old idea, but you added some fresh new aspects that make it even better.
Miss-Nina 2005-09-06 ch 4,	abuseAck! Kchan! You're super great at building tention and making my heart race like its on a german autobon! Gra! Geez. I was like: "oh no, erin's been possessed. Wait no he's not. ack! Yes he is!" And then Kale got all nice. Secretly, I wanted Daniel to kill Erin... hee hee. But eh... I guess not. You had to end the story happily? I really loved Without Flowers! Of course, it didn't last more then a month, but I loved it anyways. Go murder mysteries! Miss-nina
Nikufei Ronda 2005-09-05 ch 4,	abuseAw. Last chapter. T-T But it definately wrapped things up and everything is all settled. Go Erin! +urges you to write sidestory for them+ XD Lol. Look forward to whatever other story you've got planned next! ;D
dreamer-in-the-shadows 2005-09-05 ch 4,	abuseI enjoyed it! And faithfully reviewing for the last time! Well done again!
dreamer-in-the-shadows 2005-09-02 ch 3,	abuseI liked! It's kind of scary how people can be corrupted. Does she ever forgive him? That would be nice, but happy endings don't always exist...
ca2longoria 2005-09-01 ch 1,	abuseWell isn't that something, you write like you draw, an entirely anime feel to it I'd say and an enjoyable one at that. I only read the first chapter so far, gives me oppertunity to review you later on over something I'm already familiar with. That and I don't agree with your saying you're not much of a writer, though I do commend you on your drawing skills. The writing is fine, and as previously stated, enjoyable. The entire legal afterlife system you mentioned at the bottom of the chapter is pretty interesting as well, though you've kind of got to wonder exactly what the collective supernatural forces of your universe were thinking when they derived such a legal system much to the effect of that we use, a system primarily for the purpose to make up for what sense and reasoning most people lack in the first place. Saying that, it seems like whatever characters you have in the afterlife can't be too much wiser than the people still alive on Earth. Hehe, fun stuff. And that bilaterally oriented guy... well that's certainly something, no doubt. Oh yeah, I like your art by the way. You've got an easier time making things anime-style than I do apparently. I can't quite get the flat, curvy lines right, so I use a lot of shading to get a different effect. I don't have anything like that on the web, though I do have one picture I drew. It's in my web site. Yeah, well at any rate, intersting story you've got going, I'll be reading more later no doubt. Keep drawing, keep writing, and Adios! :-)
Miss-Nina 2005-09-01 ch 3,	abuseAwesomeism. Thats a really sad story will Kale and Daniel. I feel so bad for... well both of them. Evil demons... bleh. This fraze .::What does it mean to live without flowers?::. is really starting to bug me! What in hell does it mean? Arghh! Anyways, sad chapter... sniffles. The whole staring at the ceiling thing creeped me out. Shivers. That's one of those climax parts right before the revolutions..., sort of ish. MN
Nikufei Ronda 2005-08-31 ch 3,	abuseIt balances well. Aw, Daniel is so shaken. >__
Miss-Nina 2005-08-28 ch 2,	abuseWow! What a great chapter. I luv the way you discribe everything. You realy made it scary when Francine was attacking that man. Shivers! How scary that was. Ahem. I caught the part from sugar in the blood. it was the part in the beggining where the english teacher had a crush on the school doctor and started killing all the girl students. I'm o so happies its not another gay tale. :D MN
dreamer-in-the-shadows 2005-08-27 ch 2,	abuseHeh. I thought it was her. Mwahah. Well done, again, it was really good! Ooh! And I got a mention! Very cool!
Nikufei Ronda 2005-08-27 ch 2,	abuseAww... no BL stuff. ;o; But that's okay :D Daniel and Erin are interesting characters and this case was pretty neat!
dreamer-in-the-shadows 2005-08-23 ch 1,	abusehiya!wavesIt's me! I really like this - especially Erin, that's a really good character! It totally twists the Detective Agency type TV cliche of Scully and Mulder to a whole new level! I also like the idea of the afterlife, and the court and vampires/werewolves veing sentenced to hell for a certain amount of time. Did you come up with that yourself? It's really smart I think. Anyway, I liked, so yay!
Miss-Nina 2005-08-22 ch 1,	abuseWow, I like this chapter. Gosh... Erin scares me. It won't be another gay tale will it? XD yay This is a great idea, with ghosts and stuff, its really spooky, too. o_0Save me! YA So keep it up, I want to see chapter two! Smiles. ^_^ Luv from, MN Oh, Kchan. can you check out my gummies in my bio. Read my gummies and email me on which one you like best. Thanks. And again wonderful story! I luv it! Keep it up. Yes... chapter 2. I'm ultra curious about Erin person who creeps me out. MN
Nikufei Ronda 2005-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI'm VERY looking forward to the next chapter. This was very entertaining!

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