|Reviews for A Little Bit of Everything|
| Rachael 9/6/12 . chapter 2
Hey! I copied your chapters into a word document awhile ago because I used to not have internet access very often. If you post an email that I can contact you at I'll send you what I have for this chapter. :)
| Binkybaby 8/11/12 . chapter 33
I loved this so much.
| Ceri Anne 5/6/12 . chapter 32
Aside from a few spelling and grammatical mistakes this was a really good story! I've noticed that you haven't finished the sequel so I'm not going to read it (plus in my head the stay together and live happily ever after when he gets home!) I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this :)
| leavemeialone 7/7/11 . chapter 33
I really did enjoy this story. All the characters were so amazing. I love Kale for just about everything about herself. I like Fox for his perverted-ness and his way of relieving tension. Jordan is so cute and kind of innocent. I like how Warrick is and how he and her are so cute together. I was so sad seeing him leave but I was glad that you were still able to incorporate him back to the story. Thanks for writing this wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Warrick sounds so freakin' awesome and hot. I have to admit that Raphael does piss me off sometimes. Her mom is so awesome for standing up to Jordan and always being there for her.
| The Imagination Addict 4/16/11 . chapter 32
OH! i forgot to write sth else! i think u should change ur sequel title slightly to "And A Huge Bit of Something". just a suggestion. the 'and' suggests continuation while the contrast between 'something' and 'everything' is complemented by 'little' vs 'huge'. i think it would make the title more interesting, cos ur current title is a wee bit too monotonous (too close to title of first book). lemme noe what u think!
| The Imagination Addict 4/16/11 . chapter 33
hey! i really enjoyed ur story! u mentioned in one of ur author notes that ur writing is a bit choppy n ur sorry abt that. that's kinda the only feedback-for-improvement i hv, n since u already know it, no need to dwell! i think it has more to do w ur random personality. especially at the start. when u started the story, i kept thinking "did i miss sth? why are we suddenly here in the story?" but towards the end, it was pretty damn near perfect. :) i just really want to praise ur characterisation! it's so amazing how real ur characters r! they're consistent in their personalities. i kept reading bcos i fell in love w ur characters from the start. i loved them so much the choppy writing didn't matter anymore. great job!
so anw, im gna go check out the sequel! so excited. i think anyone who said they wouldnt like warrick just cos he's going army... they're really ANNOYING! like hello, we cant love our characters' choices all the time! i myself hoped that he wouldn't. cos i was just imagining all of jordan's heartache! but then, im STILL gna read ur sequel, cos ur writing is just THAT good. :) n im really curious how ur charatcers' lives continue! heartache or not! YAY!
| DofD 4/10/11 . chapter 23
I'm sorry about not reviewing the last chapter. I kept getting "error" every time I tried.
This chapter is amazing. I miss Warrick though.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 21
Please bring Warrick back.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 20
I love her mom. I want her mom.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 19
This is going to be interesting.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 18
Oh my goodness.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 17
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 16
When will they kiss?
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 15
I love it.
| DofD 4/8/11 . chapter 14
His dad is a dick wad.