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| Miz Em 2008-05-08 ch 29,  | abuseWell that's a relief! Hehe, I liked this chapter although it didn't feel as natural, especially when they were playing cards.. But then again there's nothing like some drama to get things moving! ^__^ Can't wait for more! |
| violet-eyez 2008-05-01 ch 29, | abuseif he enlists in the army then how is he going to do a long distance relationship with jordan? |
| free2love92 2008-05-01 ch 29, | abusegreat post! im so happy they finnaly got to be alone! cant wait for more |
| pinkeclipse 2008-04-29 ch 29, | abusewhen are they going to talk about their relationship? thanks for the chapter! |
| Inkless 2008-04-27 ch 29, | abusehaha, jordan cracks me up. that whole footsie scene was great = ] |
| fermataoso 2008-04-27 ch 29, | abuseI've just discovered this site, and this story is very addicting. I can't wait to see where it goes. |
| LeneElaine 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseVery steamy! I liked it...its about time. Who just jumps on ppl? stupid people. |
| distdect 2008-04-26 ch 29, anon. | abuseo, i loved this soo much |
| BrideofMirkwood 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseAhh... I remember being a senior... wow, that makes me sound old! =( Cute chapter! |
| Lover of ALL Books 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseYes, I did like their alone time. I loved this chapter, it had a bit of romance and funny scenes. Good chapter, and tell Jordan I don't think it's bad for her to think Warrick has a nice butt! |
| DeceptionIsMySpecialty 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseI absolutely loved this chapter. Thank goodness jordan is okay. How do you jump on someone? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. XOXO, DeceptionIsMySpecialty |
| insanity-ward 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abusefinally they kiss again! wicked awesome chapter! LUVED IT! it was way cute! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =] |
| arouralai 2008-04-25 ch 29, | abusewell it is kinda depressing but it fits his character to a T LOVED THIS CHAPTER |
| Tecna 2008-04-25 ch 29, | abuseOnly 20 days of highschool left? That's so lucky! I've yet got 2 months to go, my college finals are in 2 weeks, so they're freaking me out. Anyway, this was an awesome chapter, absolutely brilliant. Love the scene between Jordan and Warrick, they just needed a little push in the right direction. Great chapter, enjoyed it immensely! Do update when possible, no rush! Tecna ;) |
| beve 2008-04-25 ch 29, anon. | abuseah he sounds hot. and this chapter was so hot too ! xD man u've gotta stop feeding my hormones :P can u describe jordan in her swim suit? |