thats beautiful. i think the first two lines in the last stanza are not needed though... just an idea.

please check out my work. thanks.

~Alex

Hey Miz how's it going? Awesome write beautifully done. btw the site it got canceled I never canceled ya out. I have another one if ya are interested. ^_^ By all means keep on writing.

I can't be arsed to log in atm.

I love this, its such a sweet tender poem. I know that you love her so much, and I think she's among the luckiest girls alive to have you. I really hope she can make her desicion, and that everything works out for the best. *hugs*

I'll bless you, for I am as great as God. Actually I'm greater, I just let Him think he has the upper hand. *grins* ;)

- L:BVR x

This is completely awesome... loved the last stanza the most! Great poem.