I really liked it. And I'm not sure if you will consider this a compliment or not, but I was listening to death metal and your words fit in it perfectly. hahaI loved this poem

this piece is very capable of taking the reader on a journey...and even though it is not pretty you are still able to escape the reality of now and see a bit of something else...good job...

Very beautiful and heart breaking.

Superb. Rhyming often spoils a poem, but in this case it works so well it adds to the aesthetic quality. The theme is well presented and thoughtful. I love the line "Must sheer grief be my sole theme?". You capture the emotions beautifully.

Matt

That was pretty awsome! The rhyming scheme worked really well and added to it.

Wow, great job lotsa big vocabualry eh? i think there was a typo in the first stanza, it's 'an', not it's 'and' might wanna fix that

keep writing!

wow...wow, wow. the first thing that went through my mind, besides the poem's words, was, "wow." simply amazing. well written, deep, AH, who am i kidding. instant fave. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-