dominic should have been blessed with outlawed charms because he is like the leading man.. anyways... it is still great.

Woo! Nice plot. Well-organised and well-planned. Love it. This story must have taken out lots of your creativiy juice. Can feel it while reading. (:

aw, i just reread this!

aww i loved it! its sweet n cute n dramatic all in one! xoxo nice work! xoxo pauli

Pretty good story.

Another amazing read from you. I started reading your Rome series too... But I'm trying to pace myself because I don't want to run out of your fics! Thank you for your top quality work.

*sigh* I LOVE re-reading your stories...I'm biting my tongue to ask you very bluntly a question that's not really a question I supposed...

oh screw it why do you write so well? *Bewildered* Why? Ergh, well I'm a ha[ppy camper as long as you keep writing stories! :D Whyd on't you try to get them published? I love to read, and practically have a library in my house, thats almost as big as the public library so I've read. A lot. (not to brag i have a point) Your stories are my favorites published or not! I just think you could get published and should give it a go. :)Keep writing, though! :D

-Hazel

I really liked your story, it was very realistic and well-written. I planning on reading your other stories and look forward to new ones.

i like the story a lot. i finished it past midnight. started reading it 12Pm (in between work). if this was a book.. i could say, it's really a page turner. I love Against All Odds and RR. They're all great. You areally are a good writer. I'm actually reading your newly posted story Eidolon. I decided to read on your other stories some other time.. it's difficult to get so hooked up, i may get fired. haha..keep it up. You're one brilliant writer.

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it.

first, i didnt review the last chapter because my computer is fucked up, it only showed half of chapter three, so i didnt get the dominic part at all, but once my this old thing will work i will defenitely review that one to, as for the story, are the six person, domenic, doyle (why doyle, the name is...think gilmore girls and you know why), jaz, vincent, was was his name ? duke something like that and then the last girl who is jax new girl friend, frined as girl, not girl friend, agh you now what i mean! anymay, before i, well, great chapter, itd getting deeper into the actual plot and things are hedded the right direction.

aha, so let the game begin, i guess the hunk will be domenic? great start, to get to know domenic and his friends, a sort of background check. that amkes the story easier to grasp.

a new story, a great story.

i've spent the last 2 weeks reading all of your stories, and i can say i experience a sense of awe, and sadness. Awe because i am just amazed at how talented you write, I mean you could seriously turn some of your pieces into novel And sadness becasue the characters i've come to love are done. I know its hard to write a sequel and i respect that its just that you're stories are so great i just want to fin dout what happens next. Then again by not writing another, it allows our emotions to flow and lets us imagine what could be Well as i've said before, your amazing talented and i love your work, especially this one. I fell in love with Dom lol. And Alex in RR, and Logan in EHL

Are you thinking of getting published? :D I really really really adore Mating Habits of the Popular and the Petty and I think this is one of your best books.