Very nice. Please write more soon. I would love to know what happens next.

hi! thank you very much for commenting on my story. I'm comment obsessed too ^_^

this is very intriguing so far, but there isn't too much to put a review on, since this is so short. you have a wonderful beginning, so now I will leave you advice for what should happen next.

don't be afraid of writing absolutely anything. one of the things that makes for an excellent story in fantasy is unexpected turns and twists. many fantasy stories are exactly alike, but yours has started differently. try to think of ways to be different.

this is great though, so keep writing and you'll find the right way to go. :)

Oh-- Good!! =) Nice descriptive words . . It's awesome!!

I'm sure it would have been tons better if I was distracted by Charmed on TV every two minutes =P

But it's great! Are you writing more?? I hope so!! =) Good Luck!!

BTW- I've got 5 chapters from 'Carina and the Fairy Crstals' up so go ahead and read the rest ^^ Buh Byezz!

Please review, people! How can I write better if I don't know how I'm doing?