Reviews for The Road to Everywhere

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Alithia 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseIt does lack something ... an ending. :) Well-written, but it seemed rather pointless to me, because it lacks the answers to several questions: what was wrong with Mr Alden? Why did he show up in the middle of the night? But I guess, the lack of answers ties in with the fact that neither character really knows where they are going - driving but with no destination.
Mrdarcylover 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseFantastic, such a shame it didn't have a happy ending.You really should continue
Lucifer's Girl 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abusehey! I love the story, very well written, the only thing I found wrong with it was that you used "quite" when I think you wanted to use "quiet." Asides from that I love the whole idea and feel of the story, it makes you wonder and think, I really enjoyed the point of view and characterization. i really wished I knew the rest of the story, like the background to it. What happened before to hurt him so bad. AWESOME JOB! Keep on writing you are very good at it.
Bob 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it, a lot. Very tense. Left me wanting more like the nameless driver.
les petits bateaux 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abuseA really well done story, though you seriously have to put an ending to this. What happened between the two? Though I really enjoyed the tension between them...it was really well-played. Good work. :)
chocolatetuna 2005-12-14 ch 1,	abuseThat's so cute. ^_^ You totally deserve third place--in fact, I'd vote you for first! Sailor Moon is an okay series but I grew out of it long ago. Still, sometimes its nice to just kick back with your favorite stuffie (stuffed animal) and just relay the good ol' times with some sailor moon and pokemon. I think you could probably make a sequel to this, but its your choice. Great job! X3 Choco
Squeaker 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow . . . I'm all . . . depressed now. Gack. It was good; I only caught two or three grammatical/spelling errors. So, good job. I dunno . . . I guess I'm such a sucker for "Happily ever after," that I was expecting something . . . less blasé . . . I think that's the word I'm looking for, anyways.Well, good job ^^
Urbangurl 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI thought it was really good but i would like to know what happened. What was bothering him and what happened between them.
Rappleart 2005-12-02 ch 1,	abusei really like it, and yeh, i agree, it does need an ending. its very good, and ur right, the words do fall together there. i hope to c and ending sometime, hopefully soon
Jade-Rey-San 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I like it. Hope you add more chapters. It would be nice to see a sequel. Jade
Militarylver4eva 2005-10-28 ch 1,	abuseI got one word for u...AWESOME! I am like wondering what is going to happy between her and her silent passenger. What is up with him anyway? And will she ever tell him how she feels? Anyway, i totally enjoyed this first chapter... please update soon.
Funky Monkey 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story! Did you have story in mind about what made him so depressed? I love how it flows but it is lacking in a plot line... the story itself doesn't really go anywhere but the way you set it up allows the reader to fill in the gaps and think whatever they like. I think that's what I like most about your story.
elizabeth73 2005-09-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat's a wonderful short story. I really want to hear more of it. Can it be a long story, instead?
Renzie 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuse:) I liked this. Good job! < 3
Gezi 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseI want candy! Reading this is like chewing trident. It's so yummy, but the flavor doen't last very long at all and you don't get cavidies or a full stomach. Ya know what I mean? I WANT CANDY!

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