"...like elegant geisha dreams."

I loved the writing style and the imagery. Great job.

Holy **. You already know what Im about to say (Im sure it's obvious.) But just one question (Im sorry to admit:) I failed to understand the word 'geisha' ...?

This is my favourite out of all your poems. It's subject is a bit unclear, but the imagery is outstanding. Keep it up!

Wow little boys trhat ar butterflys lol wow your up there in the sky Aren't you? well butterflies are pretty and ou think little boys are too well yea um thats the end...

i'm going to assume i know what your talking about. but then again i assume alot and almost always end up wrong but eh who cares. this was good. i liked how you referred to little boys as butterflies. how they always fly around flaunting themsleves, though you know you can never catch them. (see assuming that's what you mean)

~jess