This is so touching! *bursts into tears*. Awesome work; keep writing!

Anna

Though the rhyming is a bit shaky, how it starts towards the middle but doesn't rhyme at the beginning, it has a painful meaning to it. Sometimes I want nothing more than to go back to how life used to be as well.

xo - rei

Very nice...I really liked it.

soo sad. my friend wrote a (kinda) weird piece about the same thing (momma, why are you crying)

two things: daddy should be capitalized, and i don't get exactly what you're trying to say in line 4. last time we left? left for where?

but i liked it, despite what my review makes it sound like. *thumbs up* good job!

I loved it, It was simple yet so powerfull. Keep up the good work