|Reviews for Just Like We Were Before|
| Princess-anna57 8/26/05 . chapter 1
This is so touching! *bursts into tears*. Awesome work; keep writing!
| always gats b y 8/26/05 . chapter 1
Though the rhyming is a bit shaky, how it starts towards the middle but doesn't rhyme at the beginning, it has a painful meaning to it. Sometimes I want nothing more than to go back to how life used to be as well.
xo - rei
| Alisha Marie 8/24/05 . chapter 1
Very nice...I really liked it.
| Triden 8/22/05 . chapter 1
soo sad. my friend wrote a (kinda) weird piece about the same thing (momma, why are you crying)
two things: daddy should be capitalized, and i don't get exactly what you're trying to say in line 4. last time we left? left for where?
but i liked it, despite what my review makes it sound like. *thumbs up* good job!
| itsonlyme07 8/22/05 . chapter 1
I loved it, It was simple yet so powerfull. Keep up the good work