   Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 10Please believe I sung this aloud, and I think my sister believes me to be one bulb short of said xmas tree... |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 8 that hurts the most...yes indeedy. Sometimes the repitition of lines stinks, but not this time ^_^ |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 6 Oh yes. Definate imagery , dang it! Can you write my imagery for me? :D |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 5 Not sure what it is about. And lol i won't go into my musings here and waste your time as you read them ^_^ but I do say I think it does bloody well fine standing by itself ^_^ |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 4 Okay now I'm just repeating myself, but I like this. Patience is a virtue kiddo- dd someone say that? is that being said? Sounds like something being told to me by my friend, lol, calls me kiddo. You have a way with choosing the right words to inspire visions in ones head! I'm trying to keep up with the reviews, but dang you read fast :D |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 3 This sounds more like a riddle thing. Yessir, lol, I was immediately thinking, o whats the answer? |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 2 Oh see now this is cool.It goes off on rhyming, then suddenly makes you stop. Happily lulled along in rhyming safety, thinking of Santa, then boom. Nice :D |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2006-08-08 . chapter 1 I refuse to NOT review whilst you flood me with them ^_^ (btw I didn't know that about Atwater-Rhodes! thankies! I'm still in awe of her!) As for this poem, I would have to say I like the second to last line "How can she know she'd never fly?" It just seems...I don't know, so full of meanings. Like maybe failure and not knowing of- gah, I don't know. I've been writing for a while, and my brain has stopped haha ^_^ |
 silivrenheled 2005-12-08 . chapter 6wow...you really need to read one of my poems that kinda goes like this one
the part about "Searching for the ocean
But it's too close to reach
" I have something like that in "Loss for Gain" it goes something like "Heralds of the night, swooping lower, always lower, until they are too high to touch" |
| silivrenheled 2005-12-08 . chapter 5 wonderfyl! |
| silivrenheled 2005-12-08 . chapter 4 during the daytime |
| silivrenheled 2005-12-08 . chapter 3 the thing that is denied? the thing we wanted more than the others? |
| silivrenheled 2005-12-08 . chapter 2 whee! another person!! |
| silivrenheled 2005-08-24 . chapter 1 once again, wow. i'm definitely liking this poem, as it's pretty easy to compare to-
Liriane |
 gabriellafaith 2005-08-22 . chapter 7Cool. Good job. I think you'd like my poem Secrets of the Life. |
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