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| troryfan3007 2006-11-27 ch 3,  | abuseDis is a gr8 story! luv it Jo |
| SCelestia 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a story. Beautifully written. I enjoyed every minute of it. |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 23, | abuseWow. What a lovely story. Brilliant, very touching, well written. Perhaps a few too many kisses in the last two chapters? A great story. Have you read "Sunshine in My Eyes"? It's quite similar in many ways... and definitely recommended. http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1313908 |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 17, | abuseYAY! *hugs them both* |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 15, | abuseYay for Anne! :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 13, | abuseAw. :-) Lovely ending to the chapter. I'm not looking forward to Aaron's confession though. :-( |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 4, | abuseOh dear - I can see trouble ahead... |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 2, | abuseMy favourite line: "Note to self: Ask questions that require verbal answers." Brilliant. :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseOoh reminds me of The Taming of the Shrew, kinda. |
| The Postscript 2006-01-19 ch 23, | abuseWonderful, again - congradulations for an OUTSTANDING piece...you've done really great with this story. Sorry for the delay in finishing reading this, but I really enjoyed the end and didn't have any problem starting where I left off, the plot...theme...message, they've stuck with me, and I think that should be every writer's goal with a book - making sure the message echoes long after you've read it. Great work. Keep writing. |
| The Postscript 2006-01-19 ch 22, | abuseI feel like the sarcasam lasted a little too long at the beginning, but still, this was great. I love happy endings... |
| The Postscript 2006-01-19 ch 21, | abuseoO. Guess it's been awhile, huh? Sorry I've been out of touch with your writing, but this has definitly made great strides toward improvement since I last read your work, so I just wanted you to know that you've accomplished a lot as a writer. Great story, I still love what you've put together here. |
| SCelestia 2006-01-16 ch 23, | abuseOne of the most amazing stories I have ever read. You did an EXCELLENT job and I enjoyed every second of your work. Keep writing--I look forward to seeing your next piece. =D |
| Simplify 2005-11-11 ch 19, | abuseCheese smells bad. But your story doesn't. It smells good. |
| JC-Saved-Me 2005-10-05 ch 19, | abuseHey, wow that email really sounded authentic! You really should get this story published some how :) God Bless, xRachx |