Dis is a gr8 story!

luv it

Jo

Wow, what a story. Beautifully written. I enjoyed every minute of it.

Wow. What a lovely story. Brilliant, very touching, well written. Perhaps a few too many kisses in the last two chapters? A great story. Have you read "Sunshine in My Eyes"? It's quite similar in many ways... and definitely recommended.

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YAY! *hugs them both*

Yay for Anne! :-)

Aw. :-) Lovely ending to the chapter. I'm not looking forward to Aaron's confession though. :-(

Oh dear - I can see trouble ahead...

My favourite line: "Note to self: Ask questions that require verbal answers." Brilliant. :-)

Ooh reminds me of The Taming of the Shrew, kinda.

Wonderful, again - congradulations for an OUTSTANDING piece...you've done really great with this story. Sorry for the delay in finishing reading this, but I really enjoyed the end and didn't have any problem starting where I left off, the plot...theme...message, they've stuck with me, and I think that should be every writer's goal with a book - making sure the message echoes long after you've read it. Great work. Keep writing.

I feel like the sarcasam lasted a little too long at the beginning, but still, this was great. I love happy endings...

oO. Guess it's been awhile, huh? Sorry I've been out of touch with your writing, but this has definitly made great strides toward improvement since I last read your work, so I just wanted you to know that you've accomplished a lot as a writer. Great story, I still love what you've put together here.

One of the most amazing stories I have ever read. You did an EXCELLENT job and I enjoyed every second of your work. Keep writing--I look forward to seeing your next piece. =D

Cheese smells bad.

But your story doesn't.

It smells good.

Hey, wow that email really sounded authentic! You really should get this story published some how :) God Bless, xRachx