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| Julia D. Castwyth 2005-12-17 ch 1,  | abuseUm...wow... We'll talk about this later... |
| Jeoal 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is too powerful and raw for words. I can't describe how it made me feel. A mix of awkwardness and intensity, and something of beauty, too [but let's face the fact that everything you write has that sense of beauty in it]. I shied away from reviewing it right away because it was so much those things, and I really didn't know what to say. I still don't. The emotion behind this really conveys something so much deeper than what you see on the surface, and I'd be quite interested to know your inspiration for this, if you don't mind sharing it with me. [I'll have to prompt you in the next email] Very, very commanding. Keep it up, doll. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abusewow, this is powerful. thoughtprovoking too. the vivid words are breathtaking. EB |