Reviews for Elder Siblings - FictionPress.com

DemonicAngelicVampire 2008-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI can really relate to this. I only have a year left until my brother goes to college, than it's 3-4 years until I go. I know I'm gonna miss him, cuz when he's out and we're not fighting I feel lonely. I love this poem!
foldedhearts 2005-08-27 ch 1,	abuseHey, you finished this thing! I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but poetry certainly isn't your forte. Not to say you're bad, but not to say your great either. I read the entire thing. It just droned on and on. Some of the rhyme seemed a little...off, for back of a better word, to me. You began to digress every now and again. I can't help but suspect you wished for the poem to span about two pages. I think you could have had a good poem that said the same thing in less words. And the authors note at the end is excruciating; too long. I noticed your themes are quite simple and I think that might have added to why it was so boring to me. Only an opinion, don't shoot!
Doray 2005-08-23 ch 1,	abuseLOL! I enjoyed it very much. Your rhyming words were excellent. And you made me wonder how my only sister feels towards me because I'm older than she is. This was really cool. Great job.