sad, beautiful, meaningful. Love it.

sweet. cute and it expresses alot.

aww~ what a sweet peice of artwork.. it speaks to me.. Gosh.. I love it.. simple and sweet..just like me!..hehhe.. keep up the wonderful work..!

this is so sweet and just adorable. its beautiful, simple and complex all at once. I adore the meaning, seriously, and the title just strikes me odd. I love it though.

so. very. cute.

~* noelle

Ah..very nicely written! I like how just a few words can sum up deep emotions. :)

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like my writings.-Amber

short, simple and sweet. amazingly meaningful. great job. its always hard to convey a deep message with only a few words. but u did it better than anyone else i've ever read. kudos!

So short, simple, and true. I love your heart heavy poems, keep them coming.

-ShAzzY

amazing. keep it up.

short and meaningful. that is so true. keep up the amazing work =0)

There doesn't seem to be much I can say about this that hasn't already been said, but there's never too much of a good thing, eh?

Best thing is the length - you've said in six lines what others take six stanzas to say - and yours is all the more effective for it. The last stanza works very nicely against the other two, and most of all, I really like the message beneath this. You deliver it in a lovely light style.

Maybe the only thing I'd query is the title. It's not bad, and it has meaning, but perhaps something a little more fitting or related to the phrases in the poem?

But a great poem nevertheless.

(Oh! You go to st. andrews! I'm applying there next month, I think...)

I like this. Short yet sweet. =)

The last two lines were my favorites. Very sweet and simple.

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

Cool! I like how you summed it up. Awesome! Keep'em coming and thank ya for your kind reviews. God Bless.

Needa S.

Nice. Short sweet and to the point

Very nice. ^.^