lovelove the way this rhymes..

~♥tiara

Oh, it's like a rap.
Very cute.
I especially liked "fuck everyone I'll never meet/i'm a galaxy crossed supernova/tick tick time bomb queen"

Wow..

That's all I can say.

(Goin on faves.)

Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting

This was fun...I really enjoyed this. I can give this a good beat while I read along. Nice job.

whoa- that is beyond words. I could see that as some sort of song. and it's great- you're so original and innovative. *reads again*

pyro-fish [heart]s this. metaphors and imagery and slight repetition and oh it makes me happy.

ohmygod. it's so horrifically beautiful, like a galaxyful of painful, pretty imagery in a single poem. gosh-darn gorgeous.

You work rhyme well. I got images like modern (un-noble) godiva walking through london and fastening boys to her side by their ties. Too many fantastic lines to count.

wow, you gotta write more, this is too good!

It reminds me of something out of the industrial scene... trippy in a way, though. Yeah, I don't really know, but I adore it.

stunning. I usually don't go looking in the songs section but i'm glad I did. great work!

-simpleton

I like the thematic qualities of darkness and self-destruction. The repetition of certain lines and ideas also makes it interesting.

This is amazing. I love the words you used.

this screams pj harvey. & i love her & i love this. very original & excellent rhyming.

accepting you did something wrong and doing it again and again nevertheless. wow. i love the rhyming, though i'm sure it's neseccary seeing as this is a song. you have some really(really) great lines in this!