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| no one 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I know everyone has asked themselves a similar question at some point in their lives. I love how open you leave it, just asking the questions and not answering them. But I guess it's the answers we want most of all, huh? Most of us just don't know how to ask the questions. REALLY good. :) |
| jessyxyz 2005-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseType of thing that everyone thinks about, at least once in awhile, but no one ever says out loud. I loved the last line. The only problem I had with it was the big block of text--that made it harder for me to read. Maybe you could make it into poetry form? Good job. ~Jessica |