Wow, excellently written! sort of reminds me of the wife of baths' story (it was her story, right?) from the Canterbury Tales, about how what women really want is to be treated equally to men, and to have control over their own lives.

I can't even describe it, but you have somehow captured exactly what your title says. Verry, very well done.

Interesting piece...Shakespeare's sonnets are tiring after you reading the same plot line 20 times...poor girls of "lilly's virgin purity." Good job, keep writing.

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This was excellent. Well done.

This is beautifully written, I like the 'I don't need to be saved' theme...the rhyming kind of stopped halfway through, but otherwise it was fine, and maybe you meant ot do that. Either way, great poem!Blessed be!